麻烦看下这句话到底有没有错误,More than 2000 children from all over the country,many of them had a poor family,had gotten the help!这句话从语法上讲对不对?有没有错误?

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麻烦看下这句话到底有没有错误,More than 2000 children from all over the country,many of them had a poor family,had gotten the help!这句话从语法上讲对不对?有没有错误?
麻烦看下这句话到底有没有错误,
More than 2000 children from all over the country,many of them had a poor family,had gotten the help!
这句话从语法上讲对不对?有没有错误?

麻烦看下这句话到底有没有错误,More than 2000 children from all over the country,many of them had a poor family,had gotten the help!这句话从语法上讲对不对?有没有错误?
有明显语法错误哦.
原因是：
一个简单句中,只能有一套非并列的主谓结构.
当然,也可以通过连词、标点符号来调整句子结构.
而所给句子中,标点符号却只是逗号,而不是句号、分号或破折号,因此,所给句子整体看只是一个简单句的结构框架,但却出现了两个主语、两个非并列的谓语动词.因此,肯定有失误.
可以修改为：
①More than 2000 children from all over the country,many of 【whom】 had a poor family,had gotten the help!
②More than 2000 children from all over the country,【with】 many of them 【having】 a poor family,had gotten the help!
③More than 2000 children from all over the country had gotten the help ,【with many of them having a poor family】!
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有错。从语法上讲不通。一个简单句只有一个主语，一个谓语。可是本句有俩主语，俩动词，两句之间无任何关联词，所以是错误的。那么两句之间的共同联系点是children，many of them指的也是很多孩子，所以可以改成many of whom，使得中间的一个句子成了非限制性定语从句，先行词就是children！...

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有。many of them => many of whom.