英语翻译我的个人简介里面的,不知道英语有没有错误?If your honour find my missy nickname offensive,I'll have it changed right away.Introduction:I am often in blue jeans,and I have visited many places in China,I think the most beau

英语翻译我的个人简介里面的,不知道英语有没有错误?If your honour find my missy nickname offensive,I'll have it changed right away.Introduction:I am often in blue jeans,and I have visited many places in China,I think the most beau
英语翻译
我的个人简介里面的,不知道英语有没有错误?
If your honour find my missy nickname offensive,I'll have it changed right away.
Introduction:
I am often in blue jeans,and I have visited many places in China,I think the most beautiful city is Xi'an.I major in Chemistry,and if my translations are not very well,sorry but I will do as possible as I can.Many schoolmates of mine say I am a beautiful girl,but I think just so so,however,these arrogant opinions filled in my mind,thus results in some implite words here.I often say I am your grandaunt but I do not really want to abuse you.

英语翻译我的个人简介里面的,不知道英语有没有错误?If your honour find my missy nickname offensive,I'll have it changed right away.Introduction:I am often in blue jeans,and I have visited many places in China,I think the most beau
At first,my dear friend,if you feel my nickname offensive,I'll changed it right away.
Introduction:
I am a girl and always in blue jean.Many schoolmates of mine compliment I am a beautiful lady,I think so.About my hobby,how to say,in my spare time I'm fond of going on a tour.Up to now
I have visited many good places in China,In my eyes I think the most beautiful city is Xi'an in my coutry.Now I major in Chemistry.I feel ashamed of my obscure English skill,but I will do it well as possibly as I can.
Occasionally,some arrogant opinions fill in my mind,thus results in some discourteous words from my mouth.I often say I am your grandaunt,In fact I do not really want to abuse you and hurt your feelings.It's just my tags.I believe I will correct the bad habit in future.
亲爱的,大致就这样,有空的话自己再看看,修改修改吧．我要工作了．

个人简介这么写,十个单位九个不要.

I,My太多了,而且句子都是简单句.
写在个人简介里的句子最好华丽点,多用复合句
如果是说的introdution勉强凑合，但还是有点低级，看不出水平

有些时态上的错误，仔细检查一下
拼写和用词也都有不少问题
我相信你的水平，所以就不直接说了，好自为之

实在是......
建议你直接写出汉语的，然后找人给你翻译成英文吧。