请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多ShangHai Expo Bring Me A LotEverybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how importan

请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多ShangHai Expo Bring Me A LotEverybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how importan
请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多
ShangHai Expo Bring Me A Lot
Everybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how important to protect the en
The world expo to China promoted the economic development and promoting international cooperation,speeds up the domestic infrastructure construction,but also show oneself civilization,is a great opportunity.
The world expo let me understand to how can we get the environment
We should spitting,no littering rubbish,be a good citizen.
Let us work together,make the city more beautiful
Thank you listen to me

请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多ShangHai Expo Bring Me A LotEverybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how importan
首先 第一句中的“bring ” 要改成“brings”用 第三人称
第二,“two thousand and ten Shanghai ”可以直接用阿拉伯数字 没有外国人会写一大长串的哦 直接2010就行了
第三,第二行中“Shanghai world expo held in China” 应该是被举行 所以应是 was held in china.
第四,“It iet us know that we have lots of proble now”改成“it makes us konw that we ourselves have lots of problem "
哎呀 我都无语了 我直接把改好后的文章写在下面 你自己看看错在哪里
Shanghai brings me a lot
Everybody knows that the 2010 shanghai world expo was held in china . It makes me know that we ourselves have lots of problem and how important it is to protecet the environment.
The shanghai world expo not only promoted the development of economy and,international cooperation and the domestic infrastructure construction but also a great opportunity to show chinese civilization.
The world expo lets me understand how to protect the environment.For example ,we should be a good citizen and never spiltting or littering.
let us work together to make our city more beautiful!
that's all. thank you for your listening!