帮我看看这个自我介绍有没有什么问题可以修改的It is really my luck to have this opportunity for a self introduction. Why is the lucky? you know ? I come form vocation school but I am very confident. So I cherish this opportunity.

帮我看看这个自我介绍有没有什么问题可以修改的It is really my luck to have this opportunity for a self introduction. Why is the lucky? you know ? I come form vocation school but I am very confident. So I cherish this opportunity.
帮我看看这个自我介绍有没有什么问题可以修改的
It is really my luck to have this opportunity for a self introduction. Why is the lucky? you know ? I come form vocation school but I am very confident. So I cherish this opportunity.
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My name is zk. I am 17years old. I was born in an ordinary family. I like playing basketball just like Majority boys.But my life is not so.
When I was a child I have very good until my junior high school of second year before.why? because I lost myself.
I graduated from Urumqi No.8 Middle School.What a great school.But not before I have good
I'm addicted to the game about a year until I wake is about to test time.So I have to go to a vocational school but I work hard and constantly strive to become stronger.
finally I'm an example of adversity if a my life more fortitude

帮我看看这个自我介绍有没有什么问题可以修改的It is really my luck to have this opportunity for a self introduction. Why is the lucky? you know ? I come form vocation school but I am very confident. So I cherish this opportunity.
It is really my luck to have this opportunity for a self introduction
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Why is the lucky? you know ？ I come form vocation school but I...==>
Why's that? You konw,I come from a vocation school,
I like playing basketball just like Majority boys.But my life is not so...

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Why is the lucky? you know ？ I come form vocation school but I...==>
Why's that? You konw,I come from a vocation school,
I like playing basketball just like Majority boys.But my life is not so.==>
I like playing basketball just like most of the boys,but my life is not always happy like this.
I have very good But not before I have good until I wake is about to test time.
if a my life more fortitude
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