能帮我修改下日记吗june 6th friday rainy I hope i can control my diet so that i can lose my weight,not only for the beauiful dresses ,but also for my health,fat bring more disease ,i must get some exerctise ,but recently i did not do nothing

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能帮我修改下日记吗june 6th friday rainy I hope i can control my diet so that i can lose my weight,not only for the beauiful dresses ,but also for my health,fat bring more disease ,i must get some exerctise ,but recently i did not do nothing
能帮我修改下日记吗
june 6th friday rainy
I hope i can control my diet so that i can lose my weight,not only for the beauiful dresses ,but also for my health,fat bring more disease ,i must get some exerctise ,but recently i did not do nothing ,it's not good from today now,i must do more,but how about the time i need spending the time prepare for exam.

能帮我修改下日记吗june 6th friday rainy I hope i can control my diet so that i can lose my weight,not only for the beauiful dresses ,but also for my health,fat bring more disease ,i must get some exerctise ,but recently i did not do nothing
你好这位朋友,你的日记修改如下：
June 6th Friday Rainy
I hope I can control my diet so that I can lose some weight,not only so that I get to wear those beautiful slim dresses,but also for my health as fat brings more diseases.I must get some exercises and recently I have already got it started.I did try my best,however the situation has become a bit harder for me to handle from now on.I know I must even try harder,but I don't have much time for intensive exercises since I need to spend some of my time on exam preparation as well.
有不懂的地方就开口哈~日记愉快 :-)

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June 5th Thursday Sunny
Today I regestiered for a test called "PET3," which means the "Pulic English Test System." I think it is difficult for me and I am so afraid of it. Ho...

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June 5th Thursday Sunny
Today I regestiered for a test called "PET3," which means the "Pulic English Test System." I think it is difficult for me and I am so afraid of it. However, the best way to learn English is to practise everyday. I can do it! I just need to try my best.

June 6th. Friday. Rainy
I hope I can control my diet so that I can lose my weight not only for the beautiful dresses...

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