修改英语作文.帮忙看看语法上的错误.并纠正.需修改文章：Hello!Everyone!Now I'm reading a book named Peter Pan,this book is very interesting.And I like reading it.I first met this this book because its movie.The movie about Peter

修改英语作文.帮忙看看语法上的错误.并纠正.需修改文章：Hello!Everyone!Now I'm reading a book named Peter Pan,this book is very interesting.And I like reading it.I first met this this book because its movie.The movie about Peter
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Hello!Everyone!Now I'm reading a book named Peter Pan,this book is very interesting.And I like reading it.
I first met this this book because its movie.The movie about Peter Pan is funny very much.One day,I saw a book,its name is Peter Pan.I had a lot of questions:Why does Peter never grow up?Why does Wendy help Peter?I had more and more questions.All answers in the book.Then,I bought this book.
Everyone,this is a funny book.You can find anything in the book.Peter Pan is a good book.I love it.If you read it,you will be like it too.

修改英语作文.帮忙看看语法上的错误.并纠正.需修改文章：Hello!Everyone!Now I'm reading a book named Peter Pan,this book is very interesting.And I like reading it.I first met this this book because its movie.The movie about Peter
1.Peter Pan,　逗号改成句号　this　首字母大写
2.改为 I first met this book because of its movie　
3.The movie about Peter Pan is funny very much 改为 is very funny
4.One day,I saw a book,its name is Peter Pan.改为 One day,I saw a book named Peter Pan.
5.I had more and more questions.All answers in the book.改为 All answers are in the book.
6.Everyone,this is a funny book.You can find anything in the book.Peter Pan is a good book.改为 Peter Pan is a funny book.You can find anything in the book.
7.If you read it,you will be like it too.改为If you read it,you will like it too.

“ I first met this this book because its movie”改为“First,I meet this book because the muvie”
“The movie about Peter Pan is funny very much”The movie和about Peter Pan 之间少动词
“its name is Peter Pan...

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“ I first met this this book because its movie”改为“First,I meet this book because the muvie”
“The movie about Peter Pan is funny very much”The movie和about Peter Pan 之间少动词
“its name is Peter Pan”改为“It named Peter Pan”
“I had more and more questions”more and more 错
“All answers in the book”错 不通
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The first time I meet this book is on a movie
,you would like it， too.

几点建议：
because its movie. 名词前应用 because of
All answers in the book 这句没动词，建议 should be
Peter Pan is a good book　书名　Peter Pan 加上书名号" "
you will be like it too.　　去掉be，句子里不能有两个动词。
希望帮到你。

First，I met this this book because its movie ＆ you will like it， too.

I first met this this book 用了两次this
because its movie不是因为（because）
Peter Pan is funny very much应为is every funny
one day 应为once day
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