英语改错：Health is more important than wealth .Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope in our career .To keep fit ,firstly ,it is much important for us to take more fruits and vegetable because they pr

英语改错：Health is more important than wealth .Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope in our career .To keep fit ,firstly ,it is much important for us to take more fruits and vegetable because they pr
英语改错：Health is more important than wealth .Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope in our career .To keep fit ,firstly ,it is much important for us to take more fruits and vegetable because they provide vitamins .And we should keep a balancing diet and avoid food what is rich in sugar and fat .Secondly ,we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies as strongly as possible .Beside ,we should avoid too much work pressure .Finally ,we should get rid of bad habits that damaged our health ,such as drinking and smoking .If we stick to the advice given up ,we will lead a healthy lief .一共十处错误.

英语改错：Health is more important than wealth .Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope in our career .To keep fit ,firstly ,it is much important for us to take more fruits and vegetable because they pr
Health is more important than wealth .Good health makes it【 is 删除】possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope【for】 in our career .To keep fit ,firstly ,it is much important for us to take more fruits and 【vegetable改为vegetables】 because they provide vitamins .And we should keep a 【balancing改为balanced】 diet and avoid food 【what改为which】 is rich in sugar and fat .Secondly ,we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies as 【strongly改为strong】as possible .【Beside改为Besides】 ,we should avoid too much work pressure .Finally ,we should get rid of bad habits that 【damaged改为damage】 our health ,such as drinking and smoking .If we stick to the advice given 【up改为above】 ,we will lead a healthy 【lief改为life】 .一共十处错误.

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健康比财富更重要。良好的健康使我们有可能享受我们的生活并实现我们希望在我们的职业生涯。为了保持健康,首先,它非常重要,我们采取更多的水果和蔬菜,因为它们提供维生素。和我们应该保持一个平衡的饮食,避免食物什么是富含糖和脂肪。其次,我们最好每天锻炼让我们的身体尽可能一样强烈。在旁边,我们应该避免太多的工作压力。最后,我们应该摆脱坏习惯,损坏我们的健康,如饮酒和吸...

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健康比财富更重要。良好的健康使我们有可能享受我们的生活并实现我们希望在我们的职业生涯。为了保持健康,首先,它非常重要,我们采取更多的水果和蔬菜,因为它们提供维生素。和我们应该保持一个平衡的饮食,避免食物什么是富含糖和脂肪。其次,我们最好每天锻炼让我们的身体尽可能一样强烈。在旁边,我们应该避免太多的工作压力。最后,我们应该摆脱坏习惯,损坏我们的健康,如饮酒和吸烟。如果我们坚持建议放弃,我们将带领一个健康的欣喜。

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Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope in our career . it is 改为it， career 改为careers，To keep fit , firstly , it is much important for us to take and vegetabl...

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Good health makes it is possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope in our career . it is 改为it， career 改为careers，To keep fit , firstly , it is much important for us to take and vegetable because they provide vitamins .much important 改为very important，more fruits and vegetable 改为much fruit and vegetables，avoid food what is rich in sugar and fat . what 改为which，as strongly as possible strongly改为strong，Beside改为Besides，we should get rid of bad habits that damaged our health damaged改为damage，If we stick to the advice given up , we will lead a healthy lief. given up改为given above， lief应该是life

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Health is more important than wealth . Good health makes it possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career . To keep fit , firstly , it is most imp...

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Health is more important than wealth . Good health makes it possible for us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career . To keep fit , firstly , it is most important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins . And we should keep a balanced diet and avoid food which is rich in sugar and fat . Secondly , we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies as strong as possible . Besides , we should avoid too much work pressure . Finally , we should get rid of bad habits that damage our health , such as drinking and smoking . If we stick to the advice given above , we will lead a healthy life

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