短文改错,总共10个错

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短文改错,总共10个错

短文改错,总共10个错
短文改错,总共10个错

 


短文改错,总共10个错
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing .One Sunday morning we go (go--went)fishing at a lake.We took ours(ours - our ) fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so(so去掉) we dropped the lines into the water.Before(Before - After ) waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently(impatiently - impatient ).I wanted to give up.and (and - but)my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally ,there were(were - was) a sudden pull at the pole and(加上a) fish was caught.Within the next few minute(minute - minutes),my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt(Felt - Feeling ) hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.